Sunday, February 24, 2013

NEW BEGINNING

Heighten sense's
Depths dark trench's,
Pinpoint light
Spring breath anew,
Exhale the old, Breath in the new.



3 comments:

  1. Nice job adding poetry. You can definitely use one of these poems for Blog Check #2. This style of writing seems to be one that captures your thoughts well.//lm

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  2. Your poem really touches the reality of nature. That crisp air. Freshness everywhere.
    Good Job John.

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  3. Reading this poem gives me a feeling of doing the extreme! Going mountain climbing or scuba diving the seas dark depths! Everything you do can be a new beginning. Nice Job!

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